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Be sure to put lots and lots of thought into the opening lines of your story or novel. You've got to have a great opening. It is an absolute necessity! This not only applies to those of us who are trying to impress agents and editors, but also those who plan to self-publish.
Basically there are three types of people in a bookshop:
1. The (Wo)Man on a Mission- someone who is looking for a book that has been recommended to them by a friend or colleague, or a book they have seen reviewed in the paper or on T.V. etc.
2. The Casual Browser - someone who is looking for a good book and who will go with whatever catches their eye.
3. Darren - an Engineer who never reads fiction but continually finds himself being dragged into bookshops because he has been lucky(?) enough to land a writer.....i.e. my boyfriend!
Once the (Wo)man on a mission has found what they were looking for, they often tuck their find under their arm and morph into the browser. When people are browsing books there are three things that determine whether or not they trot up to the cash desk.
1: The cover
2: The blurb
3: The first few lines - (the deal-breaker.)
I was in Easons bookshop in my hometown today. I went in with the intention of buying a magazine, but as usual gravitated towards the book section. I picked up Sophie Hannah's latest psychological thriller, The other half lives.
The cover isn't particularly eye-catching, but the title grabbed my attention.
The blurb was a real winner 'Why would anyone confess to the murder of someone who isn't dead?' (you're interested aren't you?!)
And the first line was..."I didn't want to go first."
I was immediately enthralled by this. I definitely wanted to find out what this character's deal was. So I made my way to the cash-desk and bought the book. Then I started to think just how important first lines are! The first line has become more important regarding purchases made through online bookstores too, with the introduction of the 'look-inside' facility, where shoppers can look at sample pages, including the first one.
Would you agree that the quality of the first few lines is a real deal-breaker?